Sunday, February 14, 2010
importance of being earnest body paragraph
There’s usually a motive for lying. Getting out of situations seems to be the primary motive for both Jack and Algernon. Jack uses an imaginary brother “Ernest” to escape the country, and once in town, becomes Ernest. He is a different person to the different people in his life--Ernest to Algernon, but Jack to Cecily. On the other hand you’ve got Algernon, who’s way of getting out of unpleasant situations requires no actual name-changing on his part. Algernon just claims his invalid friend “Bunbury” is ill again, and he absolutely must go visit him. Of course he must visit him precisely when Aunt Augusta wants him at a dinner party. Another major lie was performed by Miss Prism. Before she was governess to Cecily, she took care of a certain baby, whom she misplaced in a handbag. Upon realizing her mistake, and being unable to find him, Miss Prism fled and didn’t explain what had happened to. To not have the guts even to tell her boss where and when the baby had been lost meant that it would be a miracle if the baby was ever recovered--although he was recovered 28 years later. Miss Prism lied out of protection for herself, though it’d be better for everyone if she’d just explained what had happened.
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First off, about the comment you left me; I didn't put the transitions into my blog. I wrote about what my portion of my essay is on. Oh, and i have put a transition in my conclusion that I think will lead right into yours. I hope anyway. As for your paragraph. I think it is outstanding! The transitions are I think pretty close. I also don't know if this is your actual paragraph or just a blog explaining, but all the information is great and everything is just what it should be. I think maybe at the begining you could include more to explain that this is the bigger and more lifechanging type lies. that way people wont get confused with the difference of you paragraph and mine. Anyway, talk to you Tuesday and Good Job!
ReplyDeleteNora, so far your paragraph is good. Although I would add a third lie. I might've missed it... put a little commentary and it should be fine. I would add transitions and make it flow better.
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